First Draft Feedback

This is a feedback response to our opening sequence. We will plan to change various things in which we will use to help improve our grade.

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For our feedback, we had a lot of people comment on how we need to change the sound so we can hear the sequences equally and clearly. For our next piece, we will make sure to equalise the audio in the editing so everyone can be heard more clearly.

Also, we got feedback that we need to change the structure of the phone scene as there is no continuity between the two scenes. For next time we will make sure the scenes match together to create better continuity.

People liked the title sequences and the shot variation. Which is a good because the shot variation seems to be our strongest assest.

Our Priorities To Improve Are:

• Soundtrack
• Continuity



Retribution: First Draft

Editing Process

This is our editing process we went through. The process here was quite long as we just neeeded to get the footage up to edit. Once editing began, it was relatively easy to put the clips in the right place. The only downside was the time it took for us to make the titles.